Tuesday, March 18, 2008

class critique of sequential images

scene 1

scene 2 (unfinished.. still need to finish the marshmallow part, finger, and thumb)


scene 3 is not finished because this is taking me FOREVER :) will be done, ASAP.

2 comments:

sharpie_girl2004 said...

it's looking good...for your first piece u might want to add some light colors on the tree closes to the viewer. also you could add some darker colors on the rocks for the fire pit

Cynthia Garcia said...

Love the color and detail in the first illustration. The second illustration's lack of detail and information gives a sense of mystery. Very nice. Only thing i havta say is the first illustration's perspective is kinda confusing. Every object seems to be on a different slant but the ground's shading implies that it's completely flat. Maybe adding some shading to imply an uneven clearing?